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fromme2U
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0 posted 2007-12-18 06:04 PM



Tiny and hairy
When it’s shabby some think it’s scary
But the fine hair makes it a little unique
The thin lips cannot speak
But who needs words when it makes you feel complete
It enjoys caresses, kisses and a soft little rub
But if it’s too hard, your hand it quickly snubs
The feeling of your presence get’s it excited
But quickly gets jealous if someone’s invited
Your warmth makes it feel loved and delighted
And it’s affection it cannot hide it
It loves when your hand soothes it
It’s relaxing if you smile while doing it
Some like it hairy some like it bald
Some give it names too ashamed for what it is called
But you I see do not care
If it’s bald or if it has hair
They are all the same to you
Just the way they are to me too
Thank you for loving it even now that it got all fat
Thank you, thank you for caring and loving my little pussy cat!

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RevengeIsMine
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1 posted 2007-12-18 07:40 PM


Couldn't help but laugh all the way through this piece great work... loved it!
wolf girl
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2 posted 2007-12-18 09:45 PM


this was soo funny. i love how you can disguise what your actually talking about. lol
*CaT*
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3 posted 2007-12-19 11:05 AM


I love this poem, it made me laugh so much. I really like the fact that it is so random
fromme2U
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4 posted 2007-12-20 03:25 PM


Thanks for the comments.
JoeCarole
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5 posted 2007-12-21 02:04 PM


I loved the last line I really did laugh out loud
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6 posted 2007-12-21 03:57 PM


yes... it really made me smile what a random thing 2 write bout loooved it.....
Krysti

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7 posted 2007-12-23 04:27 PM


HAVE A MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!



ARCTIC WIND

LittleWillow
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8 posted 2007-12-27 12:12 PM


Hehe. Very well written.

Well done.


xxx  =]


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