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LOSTinTHISworld
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since 2003-06-01
Posts 94
canada

0 posted 2007-12-25 01:02 AM


shes all alone
she might as well be underground
she speaks out loud
but all her thought go unheard
so pick her up
and throw her into the waves
she'll have drown
before she had a chance to be saved

she wants to be the girl
who laughs out loud
and has no problems with herself
she wants to be the girl
who cries out loud
and not get put down

set your alarm
but you wont know
when hers goes off
a ticking bomb
her will is strong
it can't be stopped
rip her apart
take all the peices
and fold them up
thats how it is
for the girl
whos seen too much
but not enough

its all a dream
and thats all it will ever be
its all a dream
and that all it will ever be

memento mori

© Copyright 2007 becky dudley - All Rights Reserved
rebelangelv
Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
1 posted 2007-12-25 10:31 PM


wow this was nice. i liked the message it gave.
merry christmas

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

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