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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2007-12-20 07:06 PM

Lyrics to
The Edge of the World

The one day- that I woke up
On the wrong side of town
The stars were up and the moon was still cold
And my eyes were on the ground

It was time to hear the voice
That told me just one thing- It said

The edge of the world is perfect
There’s a place for you and me
You followed me to this heaven
At least it’s heaven to me
So let’s go down together
Fingers entwining

So he came and told me more about it
It was the perfect setting
I followed him through this dream
It was only him and me

So I looked up and I saw the face
That came with that speaking voice
The stare was intense and the eyes were a light
With what I’d call fiery choice

So I heard it say- It said

The edge of the world is perfect
There’s a place for you and me
You followed me to this heaven
At least it’s heaven to me
So let’s go down together
Fingers entwining

Knock down the walls on your box
Find a space and jump in
With freedom pick the locks down
And see the world within

That was what he said- He said

The edge of the world is perfect
There’s a place for you and me
You followed me to this heaven
At least it’s heaven to me
So let’s go down together
Fingers entwining

So let’s go down together . . .
Fingers entwining

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

1 posted 2007-12-20 10:06 PM

OH my gosh, I loved this Kate! So amazing i can't even begin to tell you. It just grabbed me right from the beginning. The imagery is amazing, the flow flawless! Wonderful, absolutely wonderful! Definately going in my library.

Rerra

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-12-21 06:48 PM

aww thanks! the guy i wrote it for and about didn't think as highly of it as you did . . . he siad it was "nice but i didn't want it" . . . what a way to start off Christmas vay-cay

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

[This message has been edited by RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed (12-22-2007 08:37 AM).]

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-12-23 04:27 PM

HAVE A MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!

ARCTIC WIND

*CaT*
Junior Member

since 2007-12-07

Posts 46
Oxford, England

4 posted 2007-12-26 09:54 AM

heya, i love this poem! if that guy can't c how talented u r then he must b really dumb. the flow is amazing and ure choice of words was brilliant. (soz i have taken so long to email back, ure link disappeared)

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2007-12-26 10:21 AM

oh cat did i not tell you, that i was a ghost, lol jk. umm well i got your email and am replying.

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

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