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Teen Poetry #8

Feeble Words

SiR3N
Junior Member

since 2007-03-07

Posts 16
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2007-12-12 03:14 AM

I posted this on here a looong time ago, and ive decided to repost it for those who liked my poem "The Heart". Personally this is my favorite poem...

I cant tell you how I feel.
The words wont cling; they drift away,
intoxicated, slight, unreal,
resisting what I want to say

(how I know our love won't fade,
the things I dream when you are gone,
the stuff of which all want is made,
why absences go on and on).

They reel and stow away their charms,
distracted, shady, and aloof;
I'd rather have you in my arms
and whisper nothings, love, as proof.

*CaT*
Junior Member

since 2007-12-07

Posts 46
Oxford, England

1 posted 2007-12-12 02:43 PM

again, a beautiful poem written by u. I really like your choice of words, it makes your relationship sound perfect and destined

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural