Teen Poetry #8 |
All That Bad |
pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
The world is on my shoulders My life is crumbling down This whole sequence of events Is something I can’t turn around And even if I could, I have to wonder if I would Sometimes life is better left unchanged There’s no choice anyway So I could sing Or I could cry But I really kind of think It’d be better to laugh until I died Life should be a party Why should I waste it being sad? The world is on your shoulders Your life is crumbling down This whole sequence of events Is something you can’t turn around And even if you could You have to wonder if you would Maybe life is better left unchanged There’s no choice anyway So you could sing Or you could cry But really don’t you think You’d rather laugh until you died? Life should be a party Why should you waste it being sad? Maybe we could sing together When the world is on our shoulders And our lives are crumbling down Why would this sequence of events Be something we would turn around If we even had the choice So we can sing But we won’t cry Although we’ll probably laugh until we die… Life is just a party And we won’t waste it being sad You know… I never really felt all that bad… |
||
© Copyright 2007 Cierra L. Robbeloth - All Rights Reserved | |||
hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow I really loved the last line beautifully written Krysti |
||
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
woah i loved this, i kinda sung it in my head while i was reading it. the effect was superb! i loved this alot! fantastic job i can't wait to read your next incredible job Rerra. -Kate "I have no other but a woman's reason: |
||
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
i forgot to add it to my library, silly me. -Kate "I have no other but a woman's reason: |
||
Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
HAVE A MERRY CHRISTMAS! ARCTIC WIND |
||
pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
Thanks, ya'll. Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to all. Rerra |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |