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0 posted 2007-12-20 10:02 PM



The world is on my shoulders
My life is crumbling down
This whole sequence of events
Is something I can’t turn around

And even if I could,
I have to wonder if I would
Sometimes life is better left unchanged
There’s no choice anyway

So I could sing
Or I could cry
But I really kind of think
It’d be better to laugh until I died
Life should be a party
Why should I waste it being sad?

The world is on your shoulders
Your life is crumbling down
This whole sequence of events
Is something you can’t turn around

And even if you could
You have to wonder if you would
Maybe life is better left unchanged
There’s no choice anyway

So you could sing
Or you could cry
But really don’t you think
You’d rather laugh until you died?
Life should be a party
Why should you waste it being sad?

Maybe we could sing together

When the world is on our shoulders
And our lives are crumbling down
Why would this sequence of events
Be something we would turn around
If we even had the choice

So we can sing
But we won’t cry
Although we’ll probably laugh until we die…

Life is just a party
And we won’t waste it being sad

You know…
I never really felt all that bad…

© Copyright 2007 Cierra L. Robbeloth - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-12-22 01:12 AM


Wow I really loved the last line beautifully written
Krysti

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2 posted 2007-12-23 09:38 AM


woah i loved this, i kinda sung it in my head while i was reading it. the effect was superb! i loved this alot! fantastic job i can't wait to read your next incredible job Rerra.

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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3 posted 2007-12-23 09:39 AM


i forgot to add it to my library, silly me.

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

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4 posted 2007-12-23 12:37 PM


HAVE A MERRY CHRISTMAS!



ARCTIC WIND

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5 posted 2007-12-23 02:13 PM


Thanks, ya'll. Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to all.

Rerra

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