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RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2007-12-18 04:34 AM

Tonight I won’t sleep
Tomorrow maybe I’ll dream
But now I’ll lie alone
Listening to you scream

Lost in a deadly ocean
That I sadly call my life
I can’t swim so I’ll sink
Finally escape the strife

Tired and lifeless
I just can’t take anymore
Battered and bruised
Somebody pull me ashore

I’m so sick of crying
But not afraid of pain
It’s your nasty words
That has driven me insane

You yell and you scream
Just to hear your own voice
I’m scared and crying again
Because I really don’t have a choice

Reach for my hand
Keep me afloat
Be my lifeline
Be my rescue boat

Don’t worry I promise
Everything will be fine
If you just get off your backside
And throw me a lifeline

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

1 posted 2007-12-18 12:13 PM

Wow this was really good. Nice write hun

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-12-18 02:55 PM

Wow Jess I really loved this... Great to see you here again
lots of love
Krysti

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

3 posted 2007-12-18 07:38 PM

Thanks guys... Your comments mean allot to me...

sonatina425
New Member

since 2007-12-18

Posts 7
Beyond the second star to the right.

4 posted 2007-12-19 12:20 PM

I think this is really wonderful. My favorite part was, "Lost in a deadly ocean/That I sadly call my life/I can’t swim so I’ll sink/Finally escape the strife ". =)

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

5 posted 2007-12-19 04:29 AM

this is really good

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

ShawtySheFly
Member

since 2007-12-19

Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)

6 posted 2007-12-19 11:57 AM

that's really good!! it's deep and it really makes you think

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

7 posted 2007-12-21 01:49 PM

dangggg this is awsome!

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

JoeCarole
New Member

since 2007-12-21

Posts 2

8 posted 2007-12-21 02:02 PM

I really liked it and I could feel the emotions

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

9 posted 2007-12-21 06:49 PM

beautious!

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

10 posted 2007-12-23 01:31 PM

HAVE A MERRY CHRISTMAS!

ARCTIC WIND

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