Teen Poetry #8 |
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Lifeline |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia ![]() |
Tonight I won’t sleep Tomorrow maybe I’ll dream But now I’ll lie alone Listening to you scream Lost in a deadly ocean That I sadly call my life I can’t swim so I’ll sink Finally escape the strife Tired and lifeless I just can’t take anymore Battered and bruised Somebody pull me ashore I’m so sick of crying But not afraid of pain It’s your nasty words That has driven me insane You yell and you scream Just to hear your own voice I’m scared and crying again Because I really don’t have a choice Reach for my hand Keep me afloat Be my lifeline Be my rescue boat Don’t worry I promise Everything will be fine If you just get off your backside And throw me a lifeline |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
Wow this was really good. Nice write hun |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow Jess I really loved this... Great to see you here again lots of love Krysti |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Thanks guys... Your comments mean allot to me... |
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sonatina425 New Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 7Beyond the second star to the right. |
I think this is really wonderful. My favorite part was, "Lost in a deadly ocean/That I sadly call my life/I can’t swim so I’ll sink/Finally escape the strife ". =) |
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wisdomofthesword Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224the last place on earth |
this is really good something thats stupid but works isn't stupid |
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ShawtySheFly Member
since 2007-12-19
Posts 71In his Elevator (LOL) |
that's really good!! it's deep and it really makes you think |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
dangggg this is awsome! If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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JoeCarole New Member
since 2007-12-21
Posts 2 |
I really liked it and I could feel the emotions |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
beautious! -Kate "I have no other but a woman's reason: |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
HAVE A MERRY CHRISTMAS! ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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