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Teen Poetry #8

Don't Fall

Elias Nevermore
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since 2007-11-03

Posts 152

0 posted 2007-12-20 01:24 AM

I only live to
catch you before you descend
into the abyss

"Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before;" -Edgar All

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

1 posted 2008-01-03 12:06 PM

I wonder why nobody's posted on this? The message is fairly simple, but what intrigued me was the use of a haiku (or was it a senyru?) Anyway, good write.

We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other.
-Luciano De Creshenzo

An assassin-in-training shouldn't.

Elias Nevermore
Member

since 2007-11-03

Posts 152

2 posted 2008-01-03 08:38 PM

i was using haiku. lol i dont even know whatsenryu is.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2008-01-05 05:52 PM

aww it's so cute. hummm, you make me miss the things that are empty in my life that should be filled.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

4 posted 2008-01-06 01:49 AM

Um... Let's see if I remember correctly... A haiku usually pertains to a season, and/or has a serious tone. A senryu is usually more light and similar to a satire.

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