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karrymotter
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since 2007-12-14

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0 posted 2007-12-14 01:32 AM

Your eyes indulge in the vast blue
Taking in all that is around you
And yet you never knew
Something could be so beautiful
Living an outrageous life before this day
Appeared to be simply whisked away
Such a happy thought
That had floated through you
When your eyes indulged in the vast blue

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superskittles
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down under in Australia

1 posted 2007-12-14 01:48 AM

woah.
this is really good!
i love the title; it really sets the scene.
well done, karrymotter!

peace.

well, it's a lovely summer day;
i can almost see a skyline through
a thickening shroud of egos.
- death cab for cutie.

SEA

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2 posted 2007-12-14 08:22 AM

welcome to pip.

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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3 posted 2007-12-14 03:15 PM

very nice first post. i loved it, it reminded me of the sky today, chilling and beautiful.

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

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4 posted 2007-12-14 06:03 PM

I agree with Kate

very beautiful. Welcome to Passions. Hope to read more soon
Krysti

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