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Teen Poetry #8

you part 2

wolf girl
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

0 posted 2007-12-12 09:32 PM

i asked for help and here is the new version. hope you like it.

i sit here staring at you
i know i dont have a chance with you
your so goregeous and unique
you are just what i seek
your older than me but just by a little
i laugh at your silly smile
i wish you would notice me
myabe you do but i dont impress you
i know im not dazzling but i shouldnt have to be
you should get to know me then you will see

you will see how happy i can be
you will see so much you never knew
you will see what we really can be
you will see the real me!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2007-12-12 09:38 PM

Enjoyed ALOT!

ARCTIC WIND

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-12-13 03:29 PM

umm you impressed the artic winds, he never puts "alot!" at the end of his "enjoyed" lol. it was improved.

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

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