steriotypical average girl

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Teen Poetry #8

steriotypical average girl

LOSTinTHISworld
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

0 posted 2007-12-12 07:03 PM

she was an average heart broken girl
longing for a heart to fall in love with her
her biggest fear, ending up alone
she was scared
she was an average depressed girl
sad thoughts always surrounding her
she tought she'd never find happiness
she was scared
she was an average lonely girl
longing for a friend to hold her
pouring her feelings into her notebook
she was scared
she was an average angry girl
breaking things and always punching walls
her hands all broken and bruised
she was scared
she was an average suicidal girl
scars on her wrists to prove that she could feel
bleeding out her pain
she was scared

and thats when you told her
she was just an average girl
and that everyone feels that way
theres no need to complain

so she wondered
if the average girl
was serious about killing herself
and in her note she wrote
"i am scared"
and she wrote
"im sorry for being
the steriotypical average girl,
i hope you take them more serious
then you did me in this world,
and when you read this,
i hope you know i wasn't
steriotypical."

memento mori

wolf girl
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

1 posted 2007-12-12 10:36 PM

this is soo good. i have felt this before. i just couldnt do it cause thats what my mom did. i love it and can relate to every line.

LOSTinTHISworld
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

2 posted 2007-12-13 12:17 PM

im glad you liked it. and im glad your still here. this was written as kind of an "ode" to the "emo kids". so many poeple feel this that it is just brushed off as feeling "normal". poeple need to be taken more seriously.

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