Teen Poetry #8 |
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steriotypical average girl |
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LOSTinTHISworld Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 94canada |
she was an average heart broken girl longing for a heart to fall in love with her her biggest fear, ending up alone she was scared she was an average depressed girl sad thoughts always surrounding her she tought she'd never find happiness she was scared she was an average lonely girl longing for a friend to hold her pouring her feelings into her notebook she was scared she was an average angry girl breaking things and always punching walls her hands all broken and bruised she was scared she was an average suicidal girl scars on her wrists to prove that she could feel bleeding out her pain she was scared and thats when you told her she was just an average girl and that everyone feels that way theres no need to complain so she wondered if the average girl was serious about killing herself and in her note she wrote "i am scared" and she wrote "im sorry for being the steriotypical average girl, i hope you take them more serious then you did me in this world, and when you read this, i hope you know i wasn't steriotypical." memento mori |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
this is soo good. i have felt this before. i just couldnt do it cause thats what my mom did. i love it and can relate to every line. |
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LOSTinTHISworld Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 94canada |
im glad you liked it. and im glad your still here. this was written as kind of an "ode" to the "emo kids". so many poeple feel this that it is just brushed off as feeling "normal". poeple need to be taken more seriously. |
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