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WaterFairy103
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since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

0 posted 2007-10-20 01:23 AM

~Another from a guy's P.O.V.~

I’ve always had this picture,
Of the perfect girl for me.
Her hair will be long and blonde,
Her eyes are glowing and green.
She has a soft, low laugh,
She’s elegant and sweet.
When I meet her, I’ve always vowed
To sweep her off her feet.

My dream girl is amazing,
Loving and sexy and warm.
She’s the woman I want to marry,
Perfect in every shape or form.

But then I met a girl,
Who’s just over five feet tall.
Her eyes are blue, her hair is red,
Not like my dream at all.
Her laugh is loud and catching,
She’s a terrible, almost dangerous klutz.
And though she’s nothing like my dream,
She’s all I can think about.

This new girl isn’t my dream,
She’s not even anywhere near.
So why can’t I stop thinking of her,
And when did she become so dear?

Baby, your hair’s a little bit darker,
And your eyes are a little more blue,
But there’s not a creature on this earth
Who I could love more than you.
No, you’re not the girl I pictured,
In my adolescent dreams,
But that doesn’t really matter,
Because you’re just perfect for me.

I SPEAK my mind because it HURTS to bite my tongue.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-10-20 10:35 AM

ahhhhhhhhhhh that's so cute! i love it. lol.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-10-20 12:40 PM

you always write such sweet poems from the guys POV.. hmm If only guys were really like that:P well this was amazing another one of my favorites from you.
Krysti

wallflower313
New Member

since 2007-10-21

Posts 5

3 posted 2007-10-21 01:12 PM

its so true how what you imagine never is what happens. nice poem.

Alaina
Member

since 2007-06-16

Posts 106

4 posted 2007-10-21 01:47 PM

i think anyone can relate to this...really great job you captured the situation perfectly

I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine?
-Eddie Vedder

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

5 posted 2007-10-24 03:05 AM

This is an interesting poem. You accurately displayed a guy's thoughts and put it together nicely.

This helped me realize something, so thank you for posting this.

The more you know, the more you know you don't know. -Socrates

Only at TroyT...

*CaT*
Junior Member

since 2007-12-07

Posts 46
Oxford, England

6 posted 2007-12-07 01:51 PM

wow thats such a gorgeous poem. its nice to hear a guys POV about that kinda stuff

jbal892
Member

since 2007-11-25

Posts 58

7 posted 2007-12-07 11:50 PM

hunnie_girl, you wrote

"you always write such sweet poems from the guys POV.. hmm If only guys were really like that:P well this was amazing another one of my favorites from you.
Krysti"

i'm like that and im a guy! lol, im not like all other guys though..i actually have a heart and pay attention to women for what they are =)

I really liked that poem by the way, it actually describes perfectly how I found my girlfriend. The entire year I had a crush on someother girl and nothing worked out and the entire time she was sitting right there, waiting for me.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

8 posted 2007-12-10 01:38 AM

jbal892 Aweez that is such a cute story best uv lucks

Krysti

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

9 posted 2007-12-13 06:28 PM

now this is what i call a by-line (the line at the bottom of people's notes and poems and comments), and yours, waterfairy,
"I SPEAK my mind because it HURTS to bite my tongue."
rocks my socks!

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

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