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Teen Poetry #8

small amount of hope

meggaxstatic
New Member

since 2007-12-11

Posts 2

0 posted 2007-12-11 10:09 PM

The Cuts so deep or just a shallow scratch
In the narrow alleys with a glint of darkness
Life is frozen, or caught on fire
Tell me does it even matter?
Falling down, or getting up
The blades of knives, against her throat
Her mass collection of suicide notes.
But there's still that small amount of hope
Falling deep, into death, the darkness
Seeking thought, perhaps she's not
Going in circles with out a light
The days so long, she dreads the night
The graves of her memories, lost deep in her dreams
The days dragging by, it's worse then it seems
Faith calling, but not faith to rely
She doesn't want death, afraid to die.
Loneliness calling, slowly she's falling
The sound of her calling
Found
Falling
And
fallling

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

1 posted 2007-12-12 12:29 PM

wow ive felt like this so many times. this was beautiful i loved it

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-12-12 01:21 AM

Very nice, so strong... Welcome to Passions

hope to read more soon
Krysti

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