Humanity ( just a rough draft

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Teen Poetry #8

Humanity ( just a rough draft

Elias Nevermore
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since 2007-11-03

Posts 152

0 posted 2007-11-30 02:21 AM

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I still don't understand this world
It seems as if morals are empty words
as if we are living in a shallow state
where are wants take the place of our needs

Humanity seems to be rotting to the core
Acts of old that were once frowned upon
seem to be a part of our daily lives

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

1 posted 2007-12-03 11:49 PM

Life sucks. You can't get past that. People are going to give you trouble and you have to deal with it.

But it gets better. A few days ago, a good friend of mine told me this:

"If you didn't have the bad things in life, there wouldn't be anything to call good."

We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other.
-Luciano De Creshenzo

An assassin-in-training shouldn't.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2007-12-11 08:55 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2007-12-12 01:06 PM

It seems as if morals are empty words

love that line.

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

*CaT*
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since 2007-12-07

Posts 46
Oxford, England

4 posted 2007-12-12 02:31 PM

I read this and began to highlight lines that I liked to paste and comment on, but found myself highlighting every line. This one especially stuck out to me

where are wants take the place of our needs

It is so true and relevant to todays world. I really like this poem, it is great to see an insight into how people perceive the world and its people

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