Teen Poetry #8 |
I will be here |
Romantic Junior Member
since 2007-12-10
Posts 28Lost in the eyes of the one i love |
I will be here when you need someone to talk to, I will be here when you need some help, I will be here when you hurt yourself, I will always be here for you, my love. I will be here when the sun rises, I will be here when the sun sets, I will be here when all hope seems lost, I will be here to help you through. I will be here when the oceans dry up, I will be here when the river runs dry, To hold your hand and comfort you, While you let go and cry. I am here to be your rock, Something you can lean against. When you feel the worst is yet to come, i'll be right there to hold you and listen. So i guess what i'm trying to say, is that i love you in every single way. Your smile brings me great joy, when you cry i cry to. I am here to be strong, in times that you can not, If you ever need me just remember, I love you for ever and ever. Love... it is the best feeling in the world... but beware.. the path to happyness can hurt alot |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
oh, this was beautiful, i want to read more- you get better each time. oh, it's so sweet. if only every guy cared as much for someone as you do for this girl, there would never be a tear in the eye of any girl. -Kate
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Romantic Junior Member
since 2007-12-10
Posts 28Lost in the eyes of the one i love |
thats what she keeps telling me... that i'm so sweet... i just wonder sometimes if thats the only thing she likes about me... Love... it is the best feeling in the world... but beware.. the path to happyness can hurt alot |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Mark.. this was so beautiful I loved it and Kate I agree with youz on this.. if only all guys were like you Mark I hope things work out.. in the end they all do... Krysti |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
awww this was definitely sweet but also much more; you can see how strongly you feel for this person with every word of this! and yes i agree, if only there were more guys out there like you. |
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