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Teen Poetry #8

Thy Heart

SiR3N
Junior Member

since 2007-03-07

Posts 16
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2007-12-09 03:42 AM

Thy heart pounds for thee alone
pumping blood to stay alive
beat for beat, and tone for tone
working with a perfect thrive

On this heart tis a vein
On this heart tis an artery
Cycling love it must maintain
proving thy is part of thee

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-12-09 08:20 AM

i LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! love love love love love love love it. ahhh it's so wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so welcome to pip and i hope to see more from you- this was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

SiR3N
Junior Member

since 2007-03-07

Posts 16
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2007-12-09 02:24 PM

Thanks a lot ^^

You dont think it was too short or anything?

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-12-10 02:30 AM

Wow Kate I have never seen u this excited before (i yhink it's the Pepsi(pepsi fixes everything)) I loved this poem it was really guud

Welcome to Passions hope to read more soon
Krysti

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

4 posted 2007-12-10 04:34 PM

no, you could add to it, but ti's absolutely fine the way it is. and she's right, i've never loved a piece as much as i love this one right here. it's nice to find a fellow old english lover.

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

SiR3N
Junior Member

since 2007-03-07

Posts 16
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2007-12-11 11:03 PM

Like it that much ? Wow. Is an honor. Lol

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