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SiR3N
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0 posted 2007-12-09 03:42 AM


Thy heart pounds for thee alone
pumping blood to stay alive
beat for beat, and tone for tone
working with a perfect thrive

On this heart tis a vein
On this heart tis an artery
Cycling love it must maintain
proving thy is part of thee

© Copyright 2007 Jarrod Newman - All Rights Reserved
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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1 posted 2007-12-09 08:20 AM


i LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! love love love love love love love it. ahhh it's so wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so welcome to pip and i hope to see more from you- this was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


-Kate


"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

SiR3N
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2 posted 2007-12-09 02:24 PM


Thanks a lot ^^

You dont think it was too short or anything?

hunnie_girl
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3 posted 2007-12-10 02:30 AM


Wow Kate I have never seen u this excited before (i yhink it's the Pepsi(pepsi fixes everything)) I loved this poem it was really guud Welcome to Passions hope to read more soon
Krysti

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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4 posted 2007-12-10 04:34 PM


no, you could add to it, but ti's absolutely fine the way it is. and she's right, i've never loved a piece as much as i love this one right here. it's nice to find a fellow old english lover.

-Kate


"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

SiR3N
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5 posted 2007-12-11 11:03 PM


Like it that much ? Wow. Is an honor. Lol
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