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justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24
Posts 321


0 posted 2007-12-10 12:32 PM


yeah umm still aint done

im rebellious,ambitious
but not superstitious
im a christian
dont think christ is fiction
cuz then you're wrong
yeah i fall
i guess im not that strong
im a human
im loved and hated
im not one to be traded
but i rise above
from deceit
im not scared of defeat
im not a dove
i aint pure
sorry,i dont have your cure
im a curse
but i'll be there for you first
im your enemy
im your friend
i'll die in the end
my fear is not all about me
but mostly for you
when i die i know where i'm goin be
but i gotta ask do you?
(2 b contin.)..again

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*CaT*
Junior Member
since 2007-12-07
Posts 46
Oxford, England
1 posted 2007-12-10 12:31 PM


i really liked the first one of these. Love the question you have added at the end.

when i die i know where i'm goin be
but i gotta ask do you?

but i rise above
from deceit
im not scared of defeat

conveys so many emotions. love it!

maddorani
Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
2 posted 2007-12-10 07:15 PM


wow i liekd it its really cool oh yea whre hav ubeen heeh
rebelangelv
Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
3 posted 2007-12-10 09:51 PM


dangggggggg w. i love the last line

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

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