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Idiosyncratic..continued
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
yeah umm still aint done im rebellious,ambitious but not superstitious im a christian dont think christ is fiction cuz then you're wrong yeah i fall i guess im not that strong im a human im loved and hated im not one to be traded but i rise above from deceit im not scared of defeat im not a dove i aint pure sorry,i dont have your cure im a curse but i'll be there for you first im your enemy im your friend i'll die in the end my fear is not all about me but mostly for you when i die i know where i'm goin be but i gotta ask do you? (2 b contin.)..again |
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*CaT* Junior Member
since 2007-12-07
Posts 46Oxford, England |
i really liked the first one of these. Love the question you have added at the end. when i die i know where i'm goin be but i gotta ask do you? but i rise above from deceit im not scared of defeat conveys so many emotions. love it! |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
wow i liekd it its really cool oh yea whre hav ubeen heeh |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
dangggggggg w. i love the last line  If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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