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Goodbye! |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
I hate you You flipping mother figure You’re Satan in disguise ‘Cept he’s a little bigger You’re so small to me Yet u control who i am I want u to die and To hell I hope you’re damned You’re just like Hitler Or maybe even worse Saddam Hussein? Mussolini? Judas? Either way you’re just a curse You’re horrible I want you to die But I can’t do it Cause it’s a crime Instead people can label me as drama They can call me emotional I don’t really care Cause I’m suicidal I’m gunna try it again The pills and the knife Each time I do I get less scared of ending my life You watch soon You’ll be at my grave I doubt you’ll even feel remorse You’ll be glad I’ve gone away I’m so through with this So this is the last thing I’ll write Doubt you’d really care but just thought I'd say GOODBYE! If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
"I’m so through with this So this is the last thing I’ll write Doubt you’d really care but just thought I'd say GOODBYE!" Wow, strong emotions. I've been there before. I really liked this, a lot  So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
thanx britney..yep i had a lot of anger burning in me last night when i wrote it...still do but not as much...thanx again! If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
i don't know why, but as i read this i just laughed. not because it was funny- it was serious and sad and angry, but i guess it's just the tired irony that i feel right now. anyways, i was entertained- so well done. -Kate
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
uum b careful dont hurt yourself |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
kate: ummm thanx??? lol n e ways glad u enjoyed it... stormy: umm yea..i will..try.. If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
not try..will-meanin will not hurt yourself not try |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
if we contin. this lgpc k? If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed  ARCTIC WIND |
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Determined Junior Member
since 2007-12-10
Posts 14Canada |
I liked it... A lot of emotion... Sounds a lot like me a while back. I can see where you're coming from... Good write! I like. Just to add, I love this bit: "I hate you You flipping mother figure You’re Satan in disguise ‘Cept he’s a little bigger" |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
thanx u guys If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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