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Elias Nevermore
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since 2007-11-03
Posts 152


0 posted 2007-11-27 10:24 PM



Just one question I wish to ask you
Only simple words I yearn to say
This may change both our lives
Yet, I'm willing to take a chance.
I know we have been friend's so long.
From the depths of my soul, I need
to speak out what i feel inside.
These words can bring happiness
or can cause me tremendous pain
You must wonder why I hesitate to ask
Please realize that this decision
affects both of us and can be the end
to all we once knew, and all we once had.
Listen closely to what I shall say.
Don't act so surprised, just hear me speak.
I have been your friend way too long.
My heart yearns for something more
than just watching life go on as it is.
Here is the question that i withheld so long,
Feel my words and take them to heart.

"Do you love me as I love you?"


[This message has been edited by Elias Nevermore (11-28-2007 01:12 AM).]

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Assassin_of_Verse
Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330
that So Cal
1 posted 2007-11-28 01:14 AM


"Don't act so surprised"
"I have been your friend way too long"

Funny how that happens a lot. *sigh* A wonderful peom, a sad, sad truth.

We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other.
-Luciano De Creshenzo

An assassin-in-training shouldn't.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-12-10 08:19 PM


Enjoyed



ARCTIC WIND

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