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Teen Poetry #8

hidden beneath my smile.

Leanne <3
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since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

0 posted 2007-12-11 12:23 PM

Dare venture into my mind
I welcome you inside
Now be careful not to trip
On the lies I try to hide.
Beware of all the guilt
It may strangle you as you pass
Rise up on your tippy-toes
As you pass emotions made of glass.
Watch your back at all times
Pain lurks not too far behind
Better hide your deepest secrets
From the dangerous grasp of my mind.
Be cautious of the darkness:
It’s where the monsters reside
They’ll feast on your biggest fears
And snack on all your pride.
Come a little further now
There’s no need to be afraid
The anger and spite will take care of you
As you travel through my masquerade.

Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved…there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years – Thomas Har

wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

1 posted 2007-12-11 07:59 PM

i like it. its seem threatening if thats what you were going for.

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

2 posted 2007-12-11 09:56 PM

yeah it pretty much was, thanks, glad you liked it! =]

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