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Teen Poetry #8

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surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

0 posted 2007-12-05 03:56 PM

The snow
Flurries falling
Wonder rising
Minds flying
But
Will the curiosity
Begin to fade
As the snow
Begins to melt

I see your face
In the mirror
It looks the same
As the day you left me
I find the picture
Of you and me
Crumpled to the ground
Lost in your eyes

Life's one mystery
How we came
To be together
In wach other's arms
One stare
Was all it took

Life's a mystery
The body
Hard to read
But eyes
A window to the soul

The scaryiness
What to see
My future, my hopes, my dreams
These all lay
Behind those windows
It's finally
What I found
In the eyes of you

*CaT*
Junior Member

since 2007-12-07

Posts 46
Oxford, England

1 posted 2007-12-07 02:15 PM

Great poem. I love the stanza:
Life's a mystery
The body
Hard to read
But eyes
A window to the soul

Its just so true

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