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Teen Poetry #8

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wolf girl
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

0 posted 2007-12-11 08:41 PM

i sit here staring at you
i know i dont have a chance with you
your so goregeous and unique
you are just what i seek
your older than me but just by a little
i laugh at your silly smile
i wish you would notice me
myabe you do but i dont impress you
i know im not dazzling but i shouldnt have to be
you should get to know me then you will see

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

1 posted 2007-12-11 09:43 PM

this is really good but it doesnt sound like its finished. id love to read more

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-12-12 01:01 PM

cute- but i want to hear more- what happens next? oh, and don't worry, there aren't very many harsh people here, especailly not in this forum.

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

*CaT*
Junior Member

since 2007-12-07

Posts 46
Oxford, England

3 posted 2007-12-12 02:38 PM

I like your choice of words, cant wait to hear part 2

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