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Teen Poetry #8

Caught in Love

pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2007-11-25 10:03 PM

I can't wait to see him
But I'm so scared to love him
Just starting to be friends
I couldn't bear to see that end
He's just like me
Wears converse and even writes poetry
And accepts my taste in music
Even though his is not the same

Then there's someone else
The althlete who stole my heart the first day of school
Who thinks he's just so cool
Even though he's really a band geek
But he's kind of cool to me

Again there's still someone else
Whose cute and sweet and kind
When we both think the other isn't looking
His eyes seem to catch mine
And his smile...
Simply devine

I couldn't hurt any of them
I hate myself forever
I think about them every day
Which one do I love?
Try to convince myself it doesn't matter
But still wish the poet would give me a hug

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

1 posted 2007-11-25 10:47 PM

Wonderful peom, an aggravating dilemma. I really liked the rythym in this particular stanza:

"Again there's still someone else
Whose cute and sweet and kind
When we both think the other isn't looking
His eyes seem to catch mine"

Wish you the best of luck!

We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other.
-Luciano De Creshenzo

An assassin-in-training shouldn't.

hunnie_girl