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A Storming Beast
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A Storming Beast |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
A storm broods in my heart, Tearing, turning my blood Hot. crimson tears flow through These veins, churning, changing Into what I'm not. The squal breaks, Freeing feelings felt Least. in a rain bleached red, I see And Feel A beast. A howl of fury Escapes, clawing through My mind. A blur, just a fever. Blind I was emotionally high (or low) when I wrote this. It may seem out of place, but if you read carefully, and disregard some of the punctuation, you'll see the pattern. As assassin shouldn't fall in love. -The lovestruck assassin [This message has been edited by Assassin_of_Verse (11-24-2007 10:35 PM).] |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
I found this very enjoyable. Although there were some spots i wasn't sure what was happening...i very much like this. Nicely written  So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
this one really got my attention and i loved reading it, i got a little lost at times but that its into the topic of the poem aswell. great write. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed  ARCTIC WIND |
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