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Miss Jane |
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Sarka Junior Member
since 2006-09-21
Posts 23Canada |
I met Miss Jane the other day. I sat with her She had lots to say. In her room all alone. She lives by herself in a nursing home Her body is weak but her soul is strong. How long will she be here? Probably not too long. She speaks alot about her life She was a mother and a wife. Her husband is gone her children are there But if you watch do they really care? They always ask her what will I get? When we finaly put you to rest. When I think of little miss Jane In my heart I can feel her pain Her disapointment shows in her eyes It will be there till the day she dies ~If we didn't have any bad days, we wouldn't appreciate the good ones~ |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
that was very sad i'm very touched it had a beautiful flow loved it i was wrong though i said your other poem was your best nope this was truly one of my favorites... hunnie*  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
This one is soo... sad? I hope that I will never act in this way to my parents when I get older, lets this be a lesson to me! Thanks for sharing this piece, I thought it was very beautiful to read. "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Oh, wow. What a poem. It was very emotional to me personally because my grandmother is in a nursing-home-type-place and it reminded me of her.  ~Alli~ |
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