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Teen Poetry #8

My Answer to Cruel Words

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

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0 posted 2007-11-15 08:47 AM

My Answer to Cruel Words

“Ps. You were so courageous
In write me this in a letter”
The phantom drip of your words
Resounds in my mind

As covered as they are in sarcasm
I don’t feel what you intend
Instead numbness and unfeeling
Thoughts and emotions clothe me

“Maybe this isn’t about you”
You word it so kindly
This letter of slapping words
Spares no expense in pain

Much of your anger
Has spilled out on me
And you’re saying so many words
That would otherwise not be

So I’ll tell you what I’ll do
Since I gave you cruel words too
I’m going to say that I’m sorry
And that I forgive you too

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

prettypinkrebel
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since 2007-11-07

Posts 104

1 posted 2007-11-15 11:35 AM

I love it, that's not how i pictured the ending... can i use this peice? me & my gurl just got in 2 it, and i htink she would totally understand this right now, but if not i understand.
Love,
Adreanna Leigh
GR8 Write

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

2 posted 2007-11-15 01:35 PM

Good poem, it's true sometimes we speak out of anger

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
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3 posted 2007-11-15 04:41 PM

of course prettypinkrebel you can use it as long as you give me the credit for writing it.

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

prettypinkrebel
Member

since 2007-11-07

Posts 104

4 posted 2007-11-15 05:04 PM

ok. thanks i will giv u credit, i just wanted to make sure it was okay to use it.
THANKS

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2007-11-17 04:46 PM

yes, you'rewelcome, i'm honored that you wish to share it with your friend. thankhe compliment.

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

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