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Teen Poetry #8

Living On The Side Of An Arrow

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2007-11-14 06:54 AM

Living On The Side Of An Arrow

Your little angel has lost her wings
Tears are rolling down her face
But it’ll be okay babe
I’ve just fallen from grace

I’ve been like this for years
But I’m sick of covering it up
So I’m pulling back the curtains
I’m finally giving up

You see she thought she knew me well
But the truth is she didn’t know me at all
It was her that pushed me to this cliff
So now it’s her job to watch me fall

It seemed the more she told me no
The more I drank away my sorrow
But everything began to change
When cupid shot me with his arrow

The rest is merely history
And here I am begging you not to go
Cause the angels are tried of looking after me
And I’ve got nowhere else to go.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2007-11-14 10:33 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

2 posted 2007-11-15 04:51 AM

jess this piece was incredible, it really is. i love the rhyming pattern and i adore the emotion. theres alot of depth here and i cant wait untill more new ones come. you did a great job here. <3

Clockwork

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2007-11-15 07:53 AM

holy crap, your title was inspired. i love the title so much! and the rest was incredible, but wow your title.

-kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2007-11-16 01:38 AM

wow I loved this Jess you are soo amazing

Krysti

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

5 posted 2007-11-16 07:18 AM

Thanks heaps guys...

I luved the title too Kate.. it came to me in a dream (don't ask i dream strange things lol)

Anyways Love N Light To All

♥Revenge♥

rebel~angel
Member

since 2006-06-20

Posts 71
Iowa USA

6 posted 2007-11-17 10:44 AM

i really liked this...just the way it flows and everything...and the title is amazing...

Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming.
-Elizabeth Haydon, Requiem for the Sun

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