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Teen Poetry #8

Portrait of Grey Skies

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2007-11-14 06:29 PM

Portrait of Grey Skies

The everlasting color of my sky
The grey that doesn’t melt
The back ground for the portrait
That you love above all others

Ha, and aren’t you so funny
Your favorite portrait now
Is the canvas of my face
Painted heavy with pain

There are so many times
That misery repeats
And today is just one of those days
Where nothing has changed

Words are thrown around
Mine stung you first
But yours did more than sting
They threw me to the ground

I’m not so hurt now
I’m trying to let this go
To be the better person
I’m changing my heart

My skies may be grey white
The color that makes me hope
That heaven offers every color but
The one in today’s skies

It’s sad we’re changing
I thought we were stronger
Than what we appear to be
Simplicity that was our unraveling

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-11-14 06:58 PM

"There are so many times
That misery repeats
And today is just one of those days
Where nothing has changed"

Dang...i have always loved you're writting style, but this has got to be one of my favorites by you!!! I loved it

Hope to read more soon.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

2 posted 2007-11-21 08:46 AM

I liked alot of the imagery you put in and some of the words you chose but it wasn't my favourite poem just cause it didn't flow as nicely as your other ones

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