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buttercupbaby
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outside in the rain

0 posted 2007-10-29 02:54 PM


this is kind of sposed to be like a song, so i hope you enjoy.
i can see you, you're within sight
but you are millions of miles away
i wish i could tell you and let you know
that if you would jus give me the chance
i would do anything in the world, you would see


i could be yours alone


so as the light fades into night
my words dont matter an you hear nothing i say
you probably don't even remember my name
but honestly i dont care, i would beg on my knees
if i thought it would make you love me,


an be yours alone


im starving for your attention, grasping for your hand
i wish i could reach out an touch you,
but the effect would impact your heart
an you could have me, you could own it all
if you would jus notice i was here


i would be yours alone


the more you run, the more im drowning on land
honest to God i dont know if i'll make it through
will i win your love... should i have to try?
im setting myself up to fall..
but for some reason i really dont even care


please jus learn to love


cause i can't be alone.

~missy
afraid of my feelings and falling too deep, but i had to let go of the pain let it rain down on me

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forever*wishing
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where my heart is
1 posted 2007-10-29 04:15 PM


it kinda reminds me of 'yours to hold' by skillet...
=] it was good tho =]

there's more to living than being alive

~Anberlin

buttercupbaby
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2 posted 2007-10-29 05:01 PM


lol, hence the "this is sposed to be kind of like a song"

haha. thanks beckel.

~missy
afraid of my feelings and falling too deep, but i had to let go of the pain let it rain down on me

forever*wishing
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where my heart is
3 posted 2007-10-29 10:46 PM


mah bad...didn't see that..lol...classic becca-ism!!! lol =]P

there's more to living than being alive

~Anberlin

buttercupbaby
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outside in the rain
4 posted 2007-10-30 09:37 PM


haha. of course. ;P
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-11-12 09:58 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

prettypinkrebel
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since 2007-11-07
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6 posted 2007-11-12 11:21 PM


LOVE IT!! Definetly how i feel gong in the lbrary :}

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

buttercupbaby
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outside in the rain
7 posted 2007-11-13 09:19 PM


thanks so much yall :]

~missy
afraid of my feelings and falling too deep, but i had to let go of the pain let it rain down on me

charlie18
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since 2007-11-14
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8 posted 2007-11-14 12:21 PM


loved it. :]

buttercupbaby
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9 posted 2007-11-20 09:47 PM


thanks :]
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