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ur story, keep turning the page. |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
In the eyes of a broken soul In place of a heart where there is now an empty hole Lies a greedy little creature It is the master of evil: a suicidal preacher There are endless tears of despair And the silent secret of wanting to share It let’s stinging tears run inside and out Confusing them without a doubt, fear and anger it unleashes out It then creeps up your spine and with its little voice says “commit suicide” They consume the advice to rid themselves of pain or a shameful side they want to hide They cut themselves from wrist to wrist Hoping they did it right so that they no longer exist They consume every pill in sight Because they have no strength to carry on the unknowing strategic fight They tie a rope to anything sturdy To wipe their existence before or after the age of thirty It doesn’t let them see how valuable they are It doesn’t let them know that happiness is not that far Depression is a psychological game Either you win or the greedy little creature gets all the fame! Written by: NR |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
oh wow this was sad and so wow i just am not sure exactly what to say but it was a very well written poem and i liked how it just flowed soooo nicely |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
sad, but I enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow this was sad and sooo true, really liked this poem  Krysti |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
wow u explained my feelings right now in a small poem thats amazing. i loved it going in library If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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