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fromme2U
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0 posted 2007-11-12 07:26 PM



In the eyes of a broken soul
In place of a heart where there is now an empty hole
Lies a greedy little creature
It is the master of evil: a suicidal preacher
There are endless tears of despair
And the silent secret of wanting to share
It let’s stinging tears run inside and out
Confusing them without a doubt, fear and anger it unleashes out
It then creeps up your spine and with its little voice says “commit suicide”
They consume the advice to rid themselves of pain or a shameful side they want to hide
They cut themselves from wrist to wrist
Hoping they did it right so that they no longer exist
They consume every pill in sight
Because they have no strength to carry on the unknowing strategic fight
They tie a rope to anything sturdy
To wipe their existence before or after the age of thirty
It doesn’t let them see how valuable they are
It doesn’t let them know that happiness is not that far
Depression is a psychological game
Either you win or the greedy little creature gets all the fame!
                                                    Written by: NR

© Copyright 2007 NRomero - All Rights Reserved
surf_painter
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1 posted 2007-11-12 07:37 PM


oh wow this was sad and so wow i just am not sure exactly what to say but it was a very well written poem and i liked how it just flowed soooo nicely
Artic Wind
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2 posted 2007-11-12 10:22 PM


sad, but I enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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3 posted 2007-11-14 12:43 PM


wow this was sad and sooo true, really liked this poem
Krysti

rebelangelv
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4 posted 2007-11-14 01:05 AM


wow u explained my feelings right now in a small poem thats amazing. i loved it
going in library

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

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