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It Feels So Right
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It Feels So Right |
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Alaina Member
since 2007-06-16
Posts 106 |
She’s in her own world and it feels so right Here, in this back room she hears voices all around Some in her direction, some going nowhere at all Her mind blanks out and she focuses on the music in her head It’s telling her the story of what she is tonight - A lonely girl in the corner, lost in the utopia of her mind It’ll be hell leaving this behind for a world far from perfect, One where she can’t get by without disconnecting herself from reality She floats down stream, into sadness’ arms – The place where she belongs, the place that’ll always be open to her No pill can make her happy, only love can But she’s running from love when she leaves this world Will the day ever come when she goes where the voices tell her to, When she pauses the music and listens to her friends? They’re trying to help her, but she doesn’t want to be saved All she wants is to stay with sadness where it feels so right I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine? |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
wow this is amazing!!!! it totally took my breath away. u truly are a great poet; i can tell my youre insight. great job!  If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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charlie18 New Member
since 2007-11-14
Posts 8Washington, United States |
this was terrific. i enjoyed reading this. |
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