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rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

0 posted 2007-11-12 03:35 PM

life has sucked for far too long
dont worry you wont miss me when im gone
dont bother to write
i wont reply back
dont bother to call
i wont pick up
dont bother to pray
im already dead
life has sucked for far too long
dont worrry NO ONE will miss me when im gone.

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

Alaina
Member

since 2007-06-16

Posts 106

1 posted 2007-11-12 05:07 PM

this was so dark. i loved the flow and feeling, it was very passionate

I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine?
-Eddie Vedder

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

2 posted 2007-11-12 07:10 PM

it was so short i would have liked to hear more in the poem but it did flow and read well which i did like

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

3 posted 2007-11-12 07:27 PM

It was straight to the point...I like it

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

4 posted 2007-11-12 08:06 PM

do u really mean this

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-11-12 10:22 PM

enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

6 posted 2007-11-14 12:47 PM

wrong! Leah darlin' I will miss you tonnes Hugs

Krysti

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

7 posted 2007-11-14 12:51 PM

alaina and surf dude: thanx! yes it was shorter than most anything ive ever written but i might add some more once i get my head back on straight

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

8 posted 2007-11-14 12:52 PM

fromme2u: thank u!
justanotherstorm: well i wrote this in th feeling so yes i suppose i did mean it...and in a way i sorta still do but it dont matter n e way that i feel/felt this way. i kinda jsut wrote this cuz it was on my mind and i was all depressed at the time so yep

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

9 posted 2007-11-14 12:53 PM

artic wind: thank u
hunnie girl: aww krysti ur so sweet! thanks. ur a really great friend. put a smile on my face for the first in a while

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

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