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Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23
Posts 330
that So Cal

0 posted 2007-11-09 09:46 PM



The drums pound,
the winds dance,
Around and Around.

The drums beat,
the winds shriek,
Around and Around.

The beat falters,
The dance stops,
the dancers gather 'round.

I feel the rhythm,
But hear the beat,
Two very differnt sounds.

I try to gather,
my shaking steps,
But I fall.

Now I must choose:
Do I bend to the beat of life,
or dance to my heart's rhythm?

As assassin shouldn't fall in love.
-The lovestruck assassin

© Copyright 2007 Andrew - All Rights Reserved
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-11-12 10:15 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

BrittanyJ
Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
2 posted 2007-11-14 06:14 PM


Wow, i'm surprized no one else posted on this. I really liked how you worded it. Let me guess, is it about making choices?

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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