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young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2007-11-02 02:19 AM

Quiet

Past the door where we crept that night
out to the car hid beneath a street light
to the putting green and a warm blanket
to share a softly whispered secret.

The stars shot by faster than time
and we never noticed the sun shine
as smiles enveloped tired eyes
and I placed a well timed sigh.

Love is in the quiet hours today,
Love is in the quiet things you say,
Love is in the confident embrace,
Love was in the shining of your face,

But it is dusk again
and the putting green is quiet.

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2007-11-02 06:37 PM

Another great piece from a talented bloke... absolutely my new favourite around here..

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-11-03 07:43 PM

Love is in the confident embrace,
Love was in the shining of your face,~

This was my favorite part. Wow Alex another piece that bloew me away(I totally agree with Jess on this) U have talent

Krysti

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

3 posted 2007-11-03 09:47 PM

again

thank you both! haha, its so great to have readers again.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

4 posted 2007-11-06 08:47 PM

wow.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

5 posted 2007-11-07 10:39 PM

....thanks kate.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

6 posted 2007-11-08 09:30 PM

i am a funny girl, yes that i know
(but it's people who are funny that make life insteresting, don't you think? lol)

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2007-11-12 10:12 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

8 posted 2007-11-14 06:11 PM

Wow, i really liked this. I'm glad that i took the time to read. Thank you for sharing.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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