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Elias Nevermore Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 152 |
Secrets unfold I turn my head to see the truth as it was written. Stories untold World forgotten, remember life when it was undiminoshed. Lies run cold Humanity suffers injustice as repen- tance for its sins. Sanity grows old Can you not see your mind leaving you to fend for yourself Men are bold They stand to fight at arms as brothers who rush to their deaths. Life I hold So seemlessly flut- tering away are the lives falling before me In the end I realize that this world is not a place for men. Its didnt accept us by choice, only chance. it cries out for us all to end the violence, But its voice goes inheard in the daunting silence. |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
Nice poem Andrew, very thought-invoking. I understood your first stanza: Secrets unfold I turn my head to see the truth as it was written. It's like your seeing the world as it was meant to be, peaceful, green, and whole. As assassin shouldn't fall in love. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
oooooooooo, wow. that was incredible, i am in awe. these lines blew me away . . . "In the end I realize that this world is not a place for men." Wow, i am immpressed (which is not easily done) very nice Andrew. -Kate "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow amazing write  Krysti |
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