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Teen Poetry #8
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wallflower313
New Member
since 2007-10-21
Posts 5
0 posted 2007-11-05 03:19 PM


Someones out there,
waiting for me.
Someones right here,
waiting for him.
But then I figure out
you've been waiting for
the wrong person.
And you never had to wait
at all , because
they have always been
in front of you.
Waiting fro you to see.
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young_blood
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since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN
1 posted 2007-11-05 03:20 PM

I'm a little confused by the last few lines. Is it a mistake that he's waiting for you or for someone else?
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-11-12 10:06 PM

I also love your name

ARCTIC WIND
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