Teen Poetry #8 |
Forbidden to Remember, Terrified to Forget |
rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
ok sooo u caught me,... i absoultely LOVED the poem titled Edward (the twilight poem) and me, reading new moon myself, started writing, at first jsut for me, but then of course it turned into a twiligh poem but thats ok because i sooooooo love that line ( the title) please note that this is only a rough draft and im still working on it, and surprisingly its starting to turn in to a really pretty song sooo im excited here it is I cried over you again last night Only a couple tears I shed I haven't done so in a long time But once again my heart bled You once said " no one can love you like I can" But then said I was not good for you And the thing I can't stand Is that I believe the lie but refuse the truth By now I'm over you And got my eyes on some But in the back of my mind its true You're my only one I hate that I love you It should not be like this But if you were to ask for me cause you love me too I fear I would say "yes" You were my best friend And my personal perfect lover I never thought everything would end But now, painstakenly, its all over I love the remembrance of how it used to be But the mintue that i start to think A pain from my heart is ripped through me So instead I just let my conscience feelings fade Forbidden to remember This numbness is met But loving that last ember I'm terrified to forget only a vampire can love you forever. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Oh i love this.. first two stanza's made me cry.. It's soo good.. and you made it your own.. Lovely write Leah, Jess |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
awww thanx jess only a vampire can love you forever. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
awwee Leah hunn, this wuz an amazing poem i loved it!!! Krysti |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
I think it goes great with the books definitely shows it's essence |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
I agree, I can just picture the part when Bella is by the meddow...-snif- I hate and love that part! poor Bella!! ...okay sorry! ummm yeah! great poem!! FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
thanxs, u guys!!! and yes the medow was on my mind writting this, but it basically just evolved from me wantingt to write something for me and falling in love witht he line from new moon " forbidden to remember, terrified to forget" cuz th ats exactly how i was feeling!!! so yea thanx again everyone! twilight ! and i call edward for my valentinte!!! only a vampire can love you forever. |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Hey!! no fair!!!!!!!! FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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