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rebelangelv
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0 posted 2008-01-29 11:55 PM


ok sooo u caught me,... i absoultely LOVED the poem titled Edward (the twilight poem) and me, reading new moon myself, started writing, at first jsut for me, but then of course it turned into a twiligh poem but thats ok because i sooooooo love that line ( the title) please note that this is only a rough draft and im still working on it, and surprisingly its starting to turn in to a really pretty song sooo im excited here it is

I cried over you again last night
Only a couple tears I shed
I haven't done so in a long time
But once again my heart bled

You once said " no one can love you like I can"
But then said I was not good for you
And the thing I can't stand
Is that I believe the lie but refuse the truth

By now I'm over you
And got my eyes on some
But in the back of my mind its true
You're my only one

I hate that I love you
It should not be like this
But if you were to ask for me cause you love me too
I fear I would say "yes"

You were my best friend
And my personal perfect lover
I never thought everything would end
But now, painstakenly, its all over

I love the remembrance of how it used to be
But the mintue that i start to think
A pain from my heart is ripped through me
So instead I just let my conscience feelings fade

Forbidden to remember
This numbness is met
But loving that last ember
I'm terrified to forget

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

© Copyright 2008 leah nelson - All Rights Reserved
RevengeIsMine
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1 posted 2008-01-29 11:59 PM


Oh i love this.. first two stanza's made me cry.. It's soo good..  and you made it your own..

Lovely write Leah,
Jess

rebelangelv
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2 posted 2008-01-30 12:13 PM


awww thanx jess

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

hunnie_girl
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3 posted 2008-01-30 05:00 PM


awwee Leah hunn, this wuz an amazing poem i loved it!!!
Krysti

surf_painter
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4 posted 2008-01-31 09:23 AM


I think it goes great with the books definitely shows it's essence
XxForever.BrokenxX
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5 posted 2008-01-31 07:28 PM


I agree, I can just picture the part when Bella is by the meddow...-snif- I hate and love that part! poor Bella!! ...okay sorry! ummm yeah! great poem!!

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

rebelangelv
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6 posted 2008-02-01 07:16 PM


thanxs,  u guys!!! and yes the medow was on my mind writting this, but it basically just evolved from me wantingt to write something for me and falling in love witht he line from new moon " forbidden to remember, terrified to forget" cuz th ats exactly how i was feeling!!! so yea thanx again everyone!
twilight ! and i call edward for my valentinte!!!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

XxForever.BrokenxX
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7 posted 2008-02-02 12:20 PM


Hey!! no fair!!!!!!!!

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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