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for grandpa. |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia 
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havent written in a while so not really sure about this one... it takes just a moment, to escape to how he used to be. Just the tick of a second to be jerked back to reality. His charming smile itself holds power to seduce your own, but the cheerful curve of lips apair dare hide secrets never shown. His eyes-the highway to his soul nursing deep compassion and eternal love, but his soul can hear the calling the tempting call from above. His a man of warm charisma of jokes and laugh and charm, but the toxic fields of yesterday have forced him to disarm. His character and empathy disintegrate more each day, Just the shell of a broken man takes place where he once lay. |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
oh wow this poem caught me in it's track it was lovely and so sad |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
o wow. that was really beautiful. very captivating. |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
very well put...you "painted" a really graphic picture of what its like when "the light starts to flicker." |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow, I loved this one darlin'  Krysti |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
thanx heaps guys, was a bit worried bout this one cause it held such meaning behind it. [xx] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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