Teen Poetry #8 |
Warrior |
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Warrior In the reflection I see The tears of a warrior Dripping into the pools That reflect them She’s vaguely familiar This crying warrior But hers is a fierce beauty A beauty based on horror She’s unlike any I’ve ever seen Distant, hard, unyielding Her eyes black in the shadows Are piercing and set to kill There is no reason for this thing For writing of this warrior I’ve never met her before And she’s terrifyingly beautiful And I choose to write of her Of me this cold ice thing I’ve never been so beautiful And I’ve never been so hard "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow [This message has been edited by RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed (10-29-2007 06:11 PM).] |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Well in my opinion I liked the first one better but the second one was good too.. nice Kate Krysti |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
I like both but first is great.. |
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