Teen Poetry #8 |
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dark abyss |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
looking towards the shadows waiting for someone to pull me out i here someone scream and they start to shout but they just scream cuz they got pulled in just another soul burning in their own sin this dark abyss leaves u in a bliss i know bliss means heaven or even paradise but thats what an abyss is sometimes we got to move on in our own lives why are we waiting for someone to pull us out we can do it ourselves just pray to God maybe we wont go to hell |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
wow thats deep kinda sad....but good liked the use of unusal words rather that just repeition. |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
i usually dont like repeating myself it get tiresome after a while |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
mmm yea i suppose it does..i h8 it cuz im like partly deaf or sumthin and i always make my friends repeat themselves like a million times. i think im kinda repetative in my work but thats okay w/ me . |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
wow r u like old or something or were u born like that not to sound rude |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
i cant even drive yet memeber!!!! dude! n e ways i think it was cuz i was always put in car w/ blasting music and my uncle always locked me in his room to blast some horrible song in my ears. ive had my ears hurt a lot of times too so maybe thats it |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
oh yeah well im sorry for your hearing |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
hahahha its cool its not that bad. just a little |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
thats good i guess |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
yea |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
im tired |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
ok.....ima go to bed soon too. i dont feel so well. i was expecting a call tho. o well. ill get it 2moro morning |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
hmm k ill talk to u later then |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
u know these forums arent like myspace pages where u can just talk back and forth....thats wut the email link is for. so yea |
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