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Teen Poetry #8

I Need to be Free

nevermore93
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 73

0 posted 2007-10-26 10:10 PM

Death, retribution, leave me now
I am tired of suffering your injustice
why do your lies consume all that I am
my hands are tied of this matter

I am finished with this pain
This shall all end now at my own preference
and you shall leave me now at your own dismay
your hold on my life is gone

my desires to live have driven you away
for my retribution has become me
pain I can no longer feel in this life
I have transcended all emotions

Now I see the truth of your ways,
for you tempted me with freedom
yet im trapped, im still trapped in my cage.

[This message has been edited by nevermore93 (10-27-2007 02:47 AM).]

nevermore93
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 73

1 posted 2007-10-26 11:33 PM

i hate when poetry goes unread. i wish this poem had gotten to see the light of day. i wont let it fade away.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-10-27 02:19 AM

No poem goes unread... Some people just dont always find the time to reply to some poems always... Well done on this piece Hope to read more soon
Krysti

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