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Teen Poetry #8

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nevermore93
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 73

0 posted 2007-10-26 07:13 PM

To breathe again is such a burden
Feeling these things again is such a pain
Having to hear humanity cry out for help,
with all its suffering is torture beyond the grave

I though i escaped this world but i've returned.
How could my peaceful end be so easily overturned.

Now i must suffer again the same fate.
the world will throw on me its burdens.
It has disturbed my only peace for it own purpose.
I know not how long I will be disturbed.
But for now I am awoken, to end the suffering
which I had escaped.

Now I face this suffering, back from the grave.

Seeker72
Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

1 posted 2007-10-26 08:32 PM

That was great.

I wonderful view on reincarnation.

That was my take anyway.

Verg
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 52
Colorado

2 posted 2007-10-26 09:06 PM

It reminds me of when the past gets thrown back into your face. It is like you are ready to deal with it but you...you almost refuse.

I liked it, it was great.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2007-10-26 09:27 PM

how sad. it was beautiful, but again saddening. hope poetry is an outlet that you thrive and grow upon. it sounds as if you need a resting place.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

4 posted 2007-10-26 10:56 PM

wow really good. i like the whole dead metaphor thing in it. it was tight

good job!

nevermore93
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 73

5 posted 2007-10-26 11:49 PM

thanx for your comments

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

6 posted 2007-10-27 02:59 AM

"Now i must suffer again the same fate.
the world will throw on me its burdens."

I hate it when something or someone drags me back into something I don't want to go into. Nice poem!

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