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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
When I leave this world everything will become so much better But I will feel sorrow for leaving them all behind But the truth is that this world will never change Please save me Save me from myself There's nowhere left to hide Thoughts of suicide Please save me Save me from myself What do you call pain Cuz I don't feel it anymore I'm too numb now Slitting my wrist But I can't feel the danger Of losing myself I'm falling behind But you're so close to me They call me emotional but they don't understand what it means I was suicidal Falling on my knees Please O God forgive me But I want to leave this world behind They don't understand what I'm going through They don't know that I am bi. Keeping this from them all my life I can feel the pain now I can feel my life passing by Please save me Save me from myself... |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Wow very powerful and I tried to write something like that but it got rejected, but have to say that youre poem reminded me of myself so much. |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
wow this is really good. i relaly like the line that says: they call me emotional but they dont understand what that means i was suicidal relaly good. |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
wow all our conversations are all over the place....really confusing...just try to email me and we can talk poems or w/e |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
yeah umm thanx |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
ur welcome  |
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