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Letter to Thee, Who so Loves Me
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Letter to Thee, Who so Loves Me |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Letter to Thee, Who so Loves Me My darling dear, My love, it’s clear My heart is set on thee With no thought of the impending With no hope of its ending With only eyes to see Sometimes a desire Lighting with fire A target we neglect Control to expend And love without end And many who suspect Two futures, not one Is the view to come We won’t think of then Sometimes are blissful Others mist filled Undetermined by men My darling dear, My love, it’s clear My heart is set on thee With no thought of the impending With no hope of its ending With only eyes to see "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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Alaina Member
since 2007-06-16
Posts 106 |
this was really great i think it would sound awesome as a song I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine? |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Kate Darling this was so beautiful... Krysti |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
wow that was amazing how ever at some spots it seemed a little forcing the rhymn but others it was just amazing and made you forget about the other parts amazing job |
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