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Teen Poetry #8

One More Taste

thinktwice
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since 2003-12-23

Posts 125
United States

0 posted 2007-10-17 05:08 AM

We could’ve tried just a little more
We could’ve listened just a little bit more
Yeah, we could’ve lived a little more
Oh, we could’ve loved a little more

And I know we all liked to talk
But I couldn’t see your face,
And I know we got on the wrong train,
So could you give me one more taste?

And If I could see your face
I would be sitting next to you,
And if I could have another chance
I would ask for one more taste of you

You see,
I’m just a fool for you
When I see your face,
Yeah,
I’m just a fool for you
When I see your face,

So could you give me one more taste?

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2007-10-17 10:06 AM

sounds like a song

thinktwice
Member

since 2003-12-23

Posts 125
United States

2 posted 2007-10-17 03:11 PM

it is a song.

not my normal stuff.

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-10-18 07:59 PM

this is a good example of why I love your work so much.. amazing poem Adam. one of my favories by you.
Krysti

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

4 posted 2007-10-18 07:59 PM

i'm not sure i like it as much as some of your other works i didn't understand parts and some ryhmning sounded forced while others just didn't seem to fit sorry

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