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Teen Poetry #8

Patty Cake

nostalgic*pride
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since 2006-08-23

Posts 122
NowhereVille

0 posted 2006-09-26 02:03 PM

Patty cake, patty cake baker's man
The voices taunt me so
Bake me a cake as fast as you can
My pain you'll never know

Roll it
Screaming for the will to move on
and Pat it
Knowing my scars will never be gone

And mark it with a B
Innocence is something I’ll never know
And put it in the oven for baby and me
While your voice taunts me so

Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

1 posted 2006-09-26 08:42 PM

Wow! No lie I really like this poem. It sounds like how I'm feeling right now.

tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

2 posted 2006-09-26 11:43 PM

wow so powerful and hurt. i loved it great write

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2006-09-27 11:08 PM

that was differnet from all your other poems i liked it i thought there was something about it that had an uniqueness it was food hope to read more poems from you soon...
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
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