Teen Poetry #8 |
I Love You |
rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
I love you so much I really do But do you love me back? I don’t have a clue You’ve told me who you love And it’s not me She doesn’t like you but I do Can’t you see? It’s this twisted triangle That I can’t get out of I’ve tried so hard to stop Because I know it’s wrong But I can’t help it It’s true I love you We’re so close Yet we are so far apart I wanna tell you But I won’t let you break my heart I can’t go through that pain That I’ve dealt with before Ill go insane And ill hit the floor Can’t believe its you I fell for But I can’t let you know I can’t let you go And now I cry when I see you With her doing things I wish I could do I don’t know what to do Cause everything’s a blur Still can’t believe I love you So I live concealing my feelings For the rest of my life Ill always hide How I really feel inside Ill just have to deal Knowing that you’ll never love me Even though I’d die for you Can’t you see? Love can lift you up high Or it can leave you to die And I’m dying cause I keep trying To take the risk But you won’t understand You’ll never be my man Yet ill still love you till the end |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Can’t believe its you I fell for~ Ahh but everything happens for a reasong even though it's not always the best for us theres always a reason. I love this poem I've felt like this in the best of times Krysti |
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Fathima New Member
since 2007-10-07
Posts 9taif,saudi arabia |
what a coincidece but you have written something that exactly tells what kind of position i'm in. i love it. it's so nice. |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
thank u!! well im glad that i had something that u could relate to. |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Your poem has some pretty strong feelings in it, well pretty strong words, but beautiful |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
strong feelings and strong words.... u think thats good? well thanx if u did |
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llushsoweet New Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 1 |
leah you AMAZE me =)))) <33333333 |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
awwwwwwww thank u !!!! i love u too!!! triple L |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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