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Teen Poetry #8
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surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10
Posts 434
Canada
0 posted 2007-11-12 07:41 PM

With objects moving
Bouncing
And bubbling
The throbbing continues
This pounding
In my head
What foolishness
My mind was
To think
You would understand
To be able to know
To hear
All that goes on
I was unable
To comprehend
My stupidity
I just need to be
Alone
By myself
So I may
Follow my guide
My instincts
Through this darkness
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prettypinkrebel
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since 2007-11-07
Posts 104
1 posted 2007-11-12 10:11 PM

I like this b/c its short sweet to the point and aplliable to most everyone! It's great to see someone understands my emoitons!
Thanks for a gr8 write
Rebel <3

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!
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