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Teen Poetry #8

Anticipating the News

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-09-27 01:25 AM

Anticipating the News

Two people together just forging ahead,
you and I baby, alone in this bed,
My first time nothing ever felt so good,
I knew it happened the way it should,

Never expected things to change,
but being 3 days late just seems strange,
A week I wait to take the test,
the agony of waiting can be such a pest,

I'll then find out, if I'm gonna have a baby,
I'll phone and tell you it's just you and me,
I don't know what you'll say or how you'll react,
you might smile and stay but I don't know for a fact,

Two people together just forging ahead,
you and I baby, alone in this bed,
sitting and talking about what we'll do,
with or without a baby i'll still need you.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2007-09-27 02:07 AM

Sweetie hold on.. An angel is waiting to guide u wethere it be a baby or not and ur guys still walks away its the angels telling you that he isn't the right one....

Luv

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-09-27 05:55 AM

oh darling dear, dear sweet, i'm young, but i know that what you lead is hard. may all thy chocies be blessed with good fruits, if they be right choices of course. CTR.

-Kate, thy loving friend

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-09-28 11:09 PM

thank you Jess and Kate... you all mean the world to me.
Krysti

Sexy_Tator_Tot
Junior Member

since 2007-08-31

Posts 42
Arkansas

4 posted 2007-10-01 11:24 AM

Through your poetry it shows that you are a strong and independent person no matter what. I believe you can do anything. Im sorry bout your troubles, best of luck and be strong and you'll pull through even stronger. Good write.

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

5 posted 2007-10-03 12:24 PM

wow that was a strong poem i loved it alot it explains what so many people have gone through and i enjoyed reading it well done

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