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Teen Poetry #8

Kiss Of Death

LOSTinTHISworld
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

0 posted 2007-10-02 11:49 PM

its been so long since you first kissed me
but i remember that night so perfectly
i tried to ignore your seductive stare all night
but i was blinded by the sparkle in your eye

even though i said i would resist
i was tempted by the thought of our first kiss
and when you asked me to follow you
i thought id be suprised but somehow i knew

before i let another moment pass
i told you our first kiss would have to be the last
you put my hand in yours and then you said to me
thats what they all said you'll see what i mean

and when you leaned towards me
i wish i could have forseen
that behind the warmth of your innocent breath
was the kiss, the kiss of death

the kiss went by so fast
i didn't realize how much time had passed
im not sure what i was expecting
but it wasnt what i thought it would be

let down by the kiss i said it was alright
you tried to convince me its better the second time
even though i was ready to move on
i felt the need to prove you wrong

and when you leaned towards me
i wish i could have forseen
that what i thought
would be a kiss for just one night
was the kiss of death
it lasts a life time

its been years and i still cant believe
that i fell for you and your kiss caught me
and now forever you'll have the tightest grip
on my heart with your deadly kiss
your deadly kiss

{in a million years i wont be over you}

[This message has been edited by LOSTinTHISworld (10-03-2007 09:51 PM).]

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

1 posted 2007-10-03 12:26 PM

wow i don't know if this is a song of sorrow or a song of rejoice there is imagery of both wow it is definitely something to think about good job it was amazingly written and i can't wait to read more like it

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-10-03 02:17 PM

wow this was amazing I can say I've been there before I loved this
Krysti

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