Pure Emotion Comprised In Poetry

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Pure Emotion Comprised In Poetry

Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2007-09-16 10:34 AM

have you ever just wanted to die
to give it up, and sleep an endless night
to go to sleep with no regrets
and to fear no more

it seems so easy,
it seems too good
the thoughts creep
but you never actually would

because you know life is a gift

if we all gave up
when times got hard
we would be dead
before we even start
and these things
go strait to the the heart
these are my words

were all human
we make mistakes
but ill take my chances
ill take my stakes

i wont wont give up
when things go bad
ill just think of your face
to cover the sad

ill just keep living
and ill smile on
because every night ends
with a rising dawn

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-09-17 12:52 PM

I really liked this mostly b/c I know the exact feeling to this poem... thank you for sharing
Krysti

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